prachi - mera bas chalta to tujhe hi gira deti.
nikhil - bhool jaa ab koi paise dunga tujhe.
prachi - mat de... tera phn gya na... usko ro maatha pakadke saale.
crowd gathered... and when crowd gathered, they take favor of girls only. nikhil couldn't do anything..
maahi was feeling better now.
she was sad but she was determined to forget the past and target the future.
animesh was again nice to maahi and maahi got her bestie back.
this was a story.. more than that this was a lesson.
it doesn't matter how nice u r writing.. it matters that how u r sharing the 'message' to people.
in all parts many things are written to describe the situation and psychology of a teen.
tough i m also a teen only but i tried to explain how much I could.
I don't have a good habit of checking back n rectify the mistakes in writhing. many parts are written in half- sleep. so sorry for the mistakes i did.
thank you all for reading.
all parts are here - http://amitvishwas95.blogspot.in/?m=1
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comments are invited.
amit vishwas
Tuesday, 24 February 2015
teenage, final part
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